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awareness (a song) November 4, 2008

Posted by meehoon in life, love, poem, poetry, song.
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unaware of truth
gone are the unnoticed
unaware af you
gone are the unnoticed

unaware of myself
unaware of you
understand myself
understanding you

unaware of you
gone are you
gone are you

here am i typing
here am i looking
looking into the far
of every possibility

unaware of myself, now
of what am i doing
anware of myself
of where i am heading

unaware unaware
unaware unaware
of what i am writing
of what i might be thinking

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1. Niyaz - November 5, 2008

Its absolutely reflections of my thoughts too , its really amazing!!!!

meehoon – thank you niyaz! sometimes life is just like floating in an ocean…moving in static…=)

2. Niyaz - November 6, 2008

yes ur words are true …still i cant recognize where i’m goin …i moving as it is……

meehoon – hope we are not always in this kinda situation. =)

3. neilina - November 6, 2008

Loved the way you carried ‘unaware’! And loved these lines….
“unaware of myself
unaware of you
understand myself
understanding you”!

meehoon – thanks! sometimes it feels so…like… ‘hey! what was i thinking and what was i trying to do?’ and than at some point ‘were i doing the right thing?’

4. Niyaz - November 7, 2008

yeah hope the same……guess one day life wl become njoyable !!